Phoenix: In addition, this fic does one of the biggest no-no's in story-telling: directly going after other people's work and disparaging it. This story is probably worse than the first one! I mean, the writing is as terrible as ever, John's a terrible character and the plot makes no sense! Phoenix: Well.might as well give our thoughts. There are no more epilogues or prologues.)Īpollo: Wait.are they saying we're gonna get more of this?Īpollo: NOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY DO WE HAVE TO PUT UP WITH THIS SOME MORE?!Īll: *defeated because they have to do another story in the future*
'The real truth behind the FemCon incident. 'All the pieces of the puzzle are finally falling into place,' he said. Storm put his hands in his pockets and stared at a torch on the wall, the fire reflecting off his glasses.
